v1p7:

75% - there was no one out there who cared as much about their well-being as I did -> Maybe “their own well-being”? It provides a little reinforcement, although maybe too much…

V11 P7 (45%)
A few days had passed for Rafinha in the others,
--> A few days had passed for Rafinha and the others,

V2 Part 10 11%
Suggestion:
"craftsmen" -> "tradesmen"

The "craft" in craftsmen brings to mind someone who makes objects, especially since crafting is a common element of RPGs. Whereas, en.wikionary.org defines a tradesman as a "skilled manual laborer", which emphasized the worker part of the meaning rather than a maker.

@Isshou It was probably “14万”, or 14 ten thousand.

Having different bases for large numbers is a common annoyance in translation. Even in English 1 million can be 10 lakh, depending on where you're speaking it.

2.10

Vice Commander Oscar had loosened the flame arrow from his hand.

“loosed”
An archaic word for “released” that we still use when speaking of arrows and hounds.

they still had the issue of filling the tenth roster spo.

“spot.”

she preferred to tend to herself In fact, a

Period.

V3 P4:
This part repeats its content.

V7 P7
63%

Now matter how much

No matter how much

@Gamen

Hello,

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Volume 2 - Part 1:

[21%] Both of Monica's parents, the Duke of Adrashelm and his wife -> Monica's father is a Baron.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Golden_hour_(photography)

The period surrounding sunset mentioned in the latest section as "magic hour" iirc.
Which term really is dominant within the US community... I'd heard of the golden hour previously and not the term magic hour, but that can't be held as definitive.

V1P1

39% - "Their almond shape gave him and air of cleverness" - Should be an air of cleverness

82% - "Your Highness." answered. "Well then," - seems to be missing the subject. I'm assuming it's supposed to be I answered

Volume 7 part 2, 90%:
"Naturally, that was because she blamed him for his earlier guffaw."
Should this be gaffe? I don't see any preceding description of Adi laughing, but there was a verbal slipup.

Vol.13 pt.4

About 50%

"Worried of the future..." prepositions are tricky things and to my ear "about" would be better here than "of".

V3P10, 46%: “Kuga also successfully dealt damage despire not using any attack skills.” - despite
63%: “I didn't expect from a fledgling country formed through terrorism by a gang of criminal adventurers.” - didn’t expect much?
85%: “Hearing [that] the explosions on the floor above hadn't stopped meant my plan had been successful.”

@toasterovenly

Thank you for your email and for taking the time to point this out. For reference:

Errors found in pre-pubs should be posted about in the correction topics on the J-Novel Club forums. Only while the pre-pub is active and ongoing for that volume. Once a volume is complete only errors found in the published ebook should be emailed in for evaluation to support@j-novel.club

Not all final corrections made for the ebook release make their way into the pre-pub parts. So once a book is released the pre-pubs become "out-of-date".

Thank you for the corrections posted for vol. 6.

Volume 4 - Part 7

[90%] But they were mostly glad he cared enough about them enough to immediatly go to their aid.
-> But they were mostly glad he cared enough about them to immediatly go to their aid.

Volume 4 - Part 9

[62%] Still, she hadn’t been able refuse a direct request from Kugamayama, […]
-> Still, she hadn’t been able to refuse a direct request from Kugamayama, […] [73%] […], but he would have had to circle around nearly the entire area shown on the standard-issue map in order reach F4.
-> […], but he would have had to circle around nearly the entire area shown on the standard-issue map in order to reach F4.

Volume 4 - Part 10

[12%] Surprised at Kanae’s strength, Elene still looked doubtful.
-> Surprised at Kanae’s strength, Elena still looked doubtful. [60%] Kanae’s gauntlets were quite similar—-they’d also been fortified with force-field armor, […]
-> Kanae’s gauntlets were quite similar—they’d also been fortified with force-field armor, […] [72%] But now both maids started in shock.
-> But now both maids stared in shock.

Volume 4 - Part 12

[13%] (something she’d learned it could capable of during a previous unrelated incident)
-> (something she’d learned it could be capable of during a previous unrelated incident) [39%] now they were now outdoors.
-> now they were outdoors. [75%] […], so she’d assumed Akira was trying to trap in her own shield.
-> […], so she’d assumed Akira was trying to trap her in her own shield. [76%] the CWH anti-materiel assault rifle could fire the most powerful ammunition.
-> the CWH anti-materiel rifle could fire the most powerful ammunition. [82%] He started to make his way over to it—but then a thought suddenly crossed his mind. He started to make his way over to it—but then a thought suddenly crossed his mind. [Sentence is written twice.]
-> He started to make his way over to it—but then a thought suddenly crossed his mind.

Volume 4 - Part 13

[52%] When he’d made it about about halfway to his goal, […]
-> When he’d made it about halfway to his goal, […] [75%] Akira relayed this into Carol and the others, […]
-> Akira relayed this to Carol and the others, […]

Volume 4 - Part 14

[4%] […], they’d gone deep into the Kuzusuhara ruins together to hunt relics—[…]
-> […], they’d gone deep into the Kuzusuhara Ruins together to hunt relics—[…] [76%] Right, back when we were exploring the Yonozuka ruins for the first time, […]
-> Right, back when we were exploring the Yonozuka Ruins for the first time, […]

@koschenill said in A Pale Moon Reverie - Corrections Topic:

Ah, it's a shame I'm too late. I was reading on catchup and spotted a 'foregoed' which should be a 'forewent'.

(Vol 2 Part 9, 12% for reference)

Email support with corrections to published works.

2.10

the General exuded a disarming personal effect.

I think this might be a case for the rare noun form of “affect.”

One had wished to be a baker and spend all day eating

“a baker spending all day” or “a baker and to spend”

Vol 1 Part 9 (32%, last sentence on page):

Hearing that natives like him had killed quite a few reincarnators was shocked me,
--> Hearing that natives like him had killed quite a few reincarnators was shocked me,